Blog # 7

- Writing Definition:

*Maturity

      Although certain features have been identified as most indicative of "syntactic maturity," these only partially answer the question   "What is mature writing?" Mature thought on the part of the author is reflected in writing in the following ways: recognizing that the audience is different from himself or herself; providing an appropriate context for his or her statements; basing his or her arguments on values the audience is likely to share; trying to anticipate and   respond to objections or questions the audience is likely to have;   recognizing the legitimacy as well as the limitations of other points of view on a given subject; acknowledging, where appropriate, the limitations of his or her own point of view; indicating what the viewpoint cannot explain; taking note of apparently contradictory evidence; and recognizing the complexity of the subject at hand by attending to more than one feature of an experience. Suggestions for evaluating writing include the following: conclusions from single pieces of writing must be made with care; no egocentric writing   must not be equated with impersonal, bland prose; recognizing egocentrism in writing is not straightforwardly simple; and definitions of mature writing may vary with the type of writing one is doing.

Being mature needs a collection of information on basic       grammar, punctuation and a wide variety of written forms. Adults returning to study (and general readers too) will enjoy its lucid, conversational style. The author makes no assumptions in terms of readers' prior knowledge - explanations are full, and each chapter contains an introduction and a summary. There are also exercises and many examples of students' writing. This accessible book will be an invaluable companion for the mature student, guiding them through what they need to know in order to write clear English.

SOURCE:

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Blog # 6

An Inspirational Story

     

How often do I have those moments when you are feeling so good that your life could not be better? I just can’t help to say almost always. If you are like me, the chances are that these moments are not as frequent as you would like me to be. I understand that you may have problems or concerns in your life now that are making it difficult for you to feel good about yourself. But by constantly focusing on your problems and concerns, your self-esteem will continue to drop. Because I have also gone to that. I will never feel good and you will feel bad instead. I end up creating a life that is not on track with my desires. This negativity brings me down, that makes me sick and creates the kind of life that I do not want to have. I do not deserve a life full of negativity. I think I’m really focusing on what is wrong in my life, and I am creating a life and future filled with negativity.

       But with the help of an inspirational story (Best Motivational  video ever).I was encourage and inspired by the ideas and thoughts of success by the man in the story. It is a great aspiration to have uplifting, encouraging, and words coming from optimistic person despite of disabilities. I could really say after viewing that “Success does means having the courage, the determination, and the will to become the person you believe you were meant to be despite of those disabilities you do have." 

#5

          Greatness is an act of heroism. It's not being strong, but in the right of strength; and strength is not used rightly when it serves only to carry a man above his fellows for his own solitary glory.He is the greatest whose strength carries up the most hearts by the attraction of his own. because as a human being with a human heart , we must lend a hand and give time to our fellowmen.even through simple things for a need, anything from which you don't get in return but a privilege of doing it.
          In spite of modern humanity's defiant attitude ,have you feel like helping? For even though your not, try to figure out Joey A.Velasco, a man with his altruistic deeds,and really a brilliant artist and a businessman.

          When I first heared his works i was really amazed as is touch because his deeds was kind a different which could be considered as real hero.Just when he help the street urchins now living "more or less rehabilitated lives," the children prayed for Velasco during the first night of his wake and thanked him "for saving them from the streets.Almost his paintings proceeds went to a foundation that assists this underprivileged children."And He's also noted for his paintings and other artworks that combined Christianity and realism and chose to be called a heartist, for his penchant for depicting social situations with the eye of his Catholic faith.You would really be inspired if you know every aspect of his life and on his journey of helping the needy specially the children.

          Undeniably speaking, I was totally shock upon knowing that he died from kidney cancer complications on July 20 this year at an age of 43.

A simple reflection from the painter:

“So, whenever you try to help the poor, you always get back more than you give. You learn the meaning of courage. You learn the meaning of sacrifice; you see the beauty of love. Above all, you feel the strength that comes from faith, and hope, and trust in God. You realize the power of prayer.
The strength of this country is not on the top. It is not in the politicians. It is not in the military, or in the police. It is not in the big businessmen. The strength of this nation is in the squatters’ shacks. Though we do not say it, our real power is in our courageous poor, praying under the bridge.”
            His words were really touching, I don’t know, really, but Joey Velasco moved me so much.

I Just Can’t Believe This Heartless Society

            One SCENE. Midnight. He couple is resting, unaware of any danger. A young woman enters their room on tiptoes and checks to make sure the owners of the house are asleep. Then she shuts off the alarm system and turns on the light of the outside passageway to make it easier for the young men to enter. As they come in, the young woman looks for plastic gloves to protect their hands and panty hose to hide their face. Minutes later, the man slips into the bedroom and bet the husband and wife to death. The girl watches calmly. After the couple is dead, she and one of the young men, who was her boyfriend, go to the motel and celebrate.

            At 3:00 in the morning, the eldest daughter of the murdered couple arrives at home. She has been out, and before going home, she stops to pick up her little brother, who ha been at an electronic room. When they get home, they confront the scene of horror and blood .The daughter looses control and curses the people who have done such horrendous deed. At the funeral in the cemetery she weeps hysterically and someone has to catch her as she starts to faint.

            Some days later the police arrest the murderers. They confess and reveal that the one who taught up their evil plan and helped them carry it out was the very daughter of the murdered couple. Yes, the girl who at the cemetery who wept so bitterly the day her parents were buried.

What could happen in the mind of an 18-year old girl that would lead her to commit such terrifying act??

            This heartless happening took place somewhere at the town of my uncle. What hurt was this girl whose up behind the plan, left her brother because of fear. And it’s more terrifying to know that for a week that her brother was alone, the boy still do the usual things he was doing before this thing happen.Their neighbor was questioned of why the boy was still going to School, playing on yard and what’s worse was that when they asked the boy, he always says “Mom and Dad love’s me, they where there.” Pointing their house.

            It’s been so hard for me to imagine a scary thing like this. Though I always say “I never believe in fictional kind of prose.” There would really be time where it came on my mind which scares me most at dark places. And if I were to ask if I believe that dead communicate with living, I would say both. It’s all because I have heard a lot of this, coming from some ancestors. Well, on the other side was that I believe in Christ and I do think there’s no such thing as those.

I Never Stop to Say

to God

"The six most important words: I admit I made a mistake. The five most important words: You did a good job. The four most important words: What is YOUR opinion? The three most important words: If you please. The two most important words: Thank You. The one most important word: We. The least important word:

            Every one of us is assigned by God to make a simple contribution.

We’re not just created for some reasons: to breath, laugh, eat, and mingle or either to take up space. We are mold to take an utmost smile from God, to make a difference with our life. Because God wants what’s best for us.

          With worldly thins we make by a simple repent of a man there comes a forgiving God. A loving God who never dares to say no to every please of His.

          But with your stage now which you were blessed by God, “Have you ever say thank you?” For every thing he has done? For every moment He saves you from sin? Please think out of it.

HIGH SCHOOL

          Honestly speaking, in my high school life I really pray so often.That I forget to say “THANK YOU” on the things that God has given to me. Because I opt to say: “Kabalo nana si God oi, nganu paman magthank you ko.Magsimba bitaw ko every Saturday. Mag-pray man gihapon ko.”

          It’s really a factual situation inside me.Though it is not what a better person should be, I’ve also thanks God because it’s one way on my part to motivate and renew myself for a better “ME”. And actually in my life now, I’ve got to practice and always wear the word “thank you” That’s why I promise from now and on : “I WILL NEVER STOP TO SAY THANK YOU TO GOD “.